Pitch Feedback

We presented our pitch to media teachers then was given feedback. When presenting I found we lacked order. It was not discussed the order of each member presenting therefore when speaking out it sounded quite disordered.
The feedback given by audience was both positive and negative. We were told by the teachers that our story seemed interesting although to complex and suggested we cut out some scenes. They commented that our storyboards were quite vague compared to the previous groups thats why we were asked more questions.
The students asked whether the openings was going to be filmed in the afternoon or later adding after that we should involve a lot of close ups.
We plan on taking all advice into action when filming.
I found the pitch could have gone much better we could have laid out the prezi more presentable and added more information so that we had less questions to answer.