Box Plot - Draft

This is the rough cut for our thriller opening.  After showing it to Rebecca and the class we were given feedback and this was what was said. Some of the shots were too long so they need to be cut ( Joyce's entrance, the mirror sot, When Alan leaves to open the door, stairs shot, when Joyce sits down, when Joyce picks up the box, the first part of the stairs clip). We will cut as soon as the object or figure is out of frame to shorten it and to make it more suspenseful. We agree with this point of feedback and we have already started. Another point that was raised was sound, which we are in the process of creating and will be added when it is finished to create that suspenseful atmosphere. We also decided as a group. to add foley sound, for example, when joyce falls to the ground and when they're walking up the stairs.